Saturday, April 6, 2013

From the Mind of a Boy: An Update (more of a revamp)



Buried Treasure
            Dark, thick blades of grass tumbled and bent in torrents of waves along the hills. Shades of green, yellow and brown laced and intertwined as the wind swept through the plains. The flowing hills stretched as far as the eye could see. While a few scattered oak trees littered the view. The sun perched directly overhead while thick tufts of clouds loftily paraded across the skyline, dipping the world in and out of the shadows. The chestnut oaks hoisted themselves towards the light; their long crenate edges gulping down the fresh spring air. Each stood as a lone tower amongst the bending hills.
            Upon the tallest hill stood the shortest, oak its trunk thick and harrowed with age. Long, rough, protruding brown scales formed the bark. The cracks between each one served as a massive highway for whatever insects chose to travel to such exotic heights. Yet the view was not the same. White linens decked the inner layers of branches, and tattered strips could be seen poking out from the edge of the leaves. And at the ridge of the trunk where each branch separated, stood a boy.
            The boy cast his eyes along the horizon, watching the hills melt into roaring waves. The wind whisked across the deck, drawing up roiling waves lathered in browned sea foam that cascaded against the hull. The wind was gusty and headed in the wrong direction; the boy knew it would be a long journey. He crouched and began uncurling a roll of parchment, tracing his finger along the dotted line until it reached the large black X. His finger paused there and began tapping it repeatedly; his mind drifting off to the splendor buried beneath the earth.
            The wind roared as it attempted to tear the map from his grasp, but the boy clutched it firmly, creasing thick jagged folds along the parchment. The sound of the crackling paper made him shudder and smile. He rolled up the map and tucked it safely into his coat. A noise drew his attention; it was the flapping of sails. He scrambled up the mast to reattach the loosened topsail; once it was secure he glanced down to the helm of the ship expecting to see his first mate. A glancing blow struck him as the memory of their last voyage came to mind: He had been abandoned by his first mate; all for the sake of some rumored treasure. Well there would be no sharing of this bounty, were he to return.
            The boy gripped the wheel, steering his way against the wind, and through the waves it brought with it. They were waves as large as hills, and even those were crested with smaller waves, that ran along them in rippling currents. But the wheel was held true upon its course, his hands steady against the force the sea was unleashing upon him. He synched the wheel with rope, and clambered up into the crow’s nest. Through the thicket of green, and across the billowing sea he saw the island; it was close, very close. He slid down the mast to the helm of the ship. He yelled for the crew to drop anchor, and began to gather supplies for his journey to the island. Shovel, check, map, check, it was all there. The rowboat had already been lowered, so he jumped down and began to paddle towards the island.
            A shovel was a poor excuse for a paddle, he thought as he ran up to the island. He stopped at the beach to pull out the map and catch his breath. There was a pattern to the rocks here, at least from what he could discern. The boy knew the rock he was looking for would have the same mark that was displayed upon the map. This island was covered in rocks of all different sizes and colors; the one he was looking for would be small and black. As he moved about the island he noticed there wasn’t a person in sight, this was good; that would mean there would be less of a chance that he would have to fight off other pirates for the treasure.
            The rocks began to blur together, his eyes only searching for the symbol displayed on the map. After what felt like an hour of searching, he finally stood before it. The boy grinned, the fools had not even bothered to disguise the hiding place; it was evident that the earth had been dug up recently. The shovel sunk into the earth with ease, and he wrenched it from the ground overflowing with the soil that separated him from his infinite wealth.
            The process took hours; the sun was no longer overhead, it waned down casting long heavy shadows upon everything it touched. While he sat regaining his breath, he clutched at his throat, sore from thirst. It did not matter, the treasure was his priority. Now on his feet and the shovel back in his hands he dug deeper, his vigor renewed. Sweat was pouring down his body, and several flies buzzed about pestering his neck and face. Again, he dug his spade into the ground, but this time he was met with the hollow crack of wood. The treasure at last; he would become rich, and with his wealth, happiness. He dug around the edges completely unearthing the chest so he could take a look within.
            He ran his fingers around the sides of the chest; no lock or latch. He sat for a moment puzzled and began dusting off the top. Nails, they had secured their treasure by the use of nails. Laughter filled the hole, as he scoffed at these pathetic pirates. With ease he drove the edge of his spade between the lid and the chest, and began prying them apart. His heart ran wildly as he eagerly loosened each nail from the chest.
            One nail popped out, then another, and another. The pace of his breath now matched his heart, and that was all he could hear. The buzz of flies withered into a deadening silence, and his deafness to the outside world took him into the depths and sounds of his body. And then, the last nail was free, and the hammering of his heart continued, but his breathing did not.
            The boy knelt, his fingers curling under the lid of the chest, relishing the smooth touch of unblemished wood. After a moment of hesitation he drew back the lid, and every sound came back. The wind was whipping above, and the flies no longer buzzed along his face, but dove into the stench that rose from the chest. And in the shadows of the hole, the memories flooded back. The bed and the cold metal railings, the tears, and the awful people dressed in white. He remembered the adults that did nothing—the adults that stood there, as he did, and watched. The tears came back with the memories. Pouring, tearing, and drowning him with what had happened. He knew now what the symbols of the stone now read:
Here Lies “First mate”
Loving brother, and son.
Loved and missed.
The boy remembers now; the sea took him, the sea did, that must be how.

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